In this video I want to show you three techniques to help us write the kinds of stories that grab readers and make them forget they should have been asleep two hours ago.

I’m currently editing my eighth novel, Project Ventus and I've found a moment in where I’m not grabbing the reader.

So let’s take a look at this short moment from my book, and while I read it, see what you think needs to change.

Then we’ll talk through those three techniques we can use to fix it.

Thanks for watching!

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